So, very very very slowly working on this manga. Stuffed up the sound effect in the third panel (Reads right to left). I stopped work when my laptop died, saved the files and put them on my new laptop. So back to work I go. A few days I go threw in the towel on comics completely because my heart wasn't in it any more and I was ready to give it up because I honestly felt like it wasn't me any more but I've had a change of heart and some motivation, so yeah...
These are all my own story and what not and this is the one I was planning on releasing as a PDF first for selected viewers to read.
I really love how you've put this page together. It all fits in balance and I'm even happier you have the laptop and awesome tablet now. It's all ready to roll and I'll be watching for more pages. I've got some pencils somewhere, so I'll force myself to draw some guns and maybe a motorbike or something. Of course, fantasy based ones with rockets and shit. If you can understand all of the weapons in Borderlands, you can draw fake weapons.
Yeah it's excellent. You can actually recline and be calm. Being tense just doesn't do it for an artist. Unless you were trying to make a really tense work.